Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
NYC Spark & Casual Start
Erin and Garrett meet in NYC, share a casual hookup, and develop quick feelings. Despite Erin's short stay, Garrett confesses his love at the airport, initiating a long-distance relationship.
Key Events
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NYC Bar Encounter — Casual meeting sparks immediate chemistry. Characters: Garrett Scully
Location: NYC Bar
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Casual Morning After — Agreement to keep things casual. Characters: Garrett Scully, Dan Grant
Location: Garrett's Apartment
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Internship Success — Well-received article opens career doors. Location: NYC Newspaper
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Garrett's Job Dissatisfaction — Hates assigned band management role. Characters: Garrett Scully
Location: NYC Office
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Airport Confession — Garrett chases Erin to propose LDR. Characters: Garrett Scully
Location: NYC Airport
Distance Trials & Jealousy
The couple navigates time zones and awkward calls while Erin faces career uncertainty. A Thanksgiving visit leads to an embarrassing family encounter, and Garrett's jealousy over Damon tests their trust.
Key Events
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Airport Confession — Garrett chases Erin to propose LDR. Characters: Garrett Scully
Location: NYC Airport
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Long Distance Planning — Navigating time zones and schedules. Characters: Garrett Scully
Location: Phone/Online
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Thanksgiving Visit — Surprise trip strengthens bond. Characters: Garrett Scully
Location: San Francisco
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Dining Room Incident — Passionate moment interrupted by family. Characters: Garrett Scully
Location: Corinne's House
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Concert & Jealousy — Garrett's jealousy over Damon surfaces. Characters: Garrett Scully, Damon
Location: Concert Venue
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Damon's Bar Encounter — Drinking together tests commitment. Characters: Damon
Location: SF Bar
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Awkward Phone Sex — Failed intimate call leaves both awkward. Characters: Garrett Scully
Location: Phone
Career Crossroads & Breakup
Erin receives a dream job offer in San Francisco, triggering a major fight with Garrett. After a brief reconciliation, Garrett realizes he must prioritize her career, leading to an emotional airport separation.
Key Events
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Awkward Phone Sex — Failed intimate call leaves both awkward. Characters: Garrett Scully
Location: Phone
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Professor's Recommendation — Academic endorsement for SF Chronicle. Location: University
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Job Offer Call — Dream job offer blindsides Garrett. Location: SF Apartment
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NYC Reunion Fight — Happy reunion turns into major argument. Characters: Garrett Scully
Location: NYC Friend's Apartment
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Relocation Proposal — Garrett asks Erin to move to NYC. Characters: Garrett Scully
Location: Phone
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Airport Breakup — Emotional parting prioritizes career. Characters: Garrett Scully
Location: SF Airport
Six Months Later & New Beginnings
Both pursue their ambitions independently. Garrett quits his old job to manage his band and moves closer to Erin. A concert reunion reignites their romance, ending on a comedic family note.
Key Events
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Airport Breakup — Emotional parting prioritizes career. Characters: Garrett Scully
Location: SF Airport
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Career Milestone — Erin achieves professional success. Location: SF Office
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Garrett's Career Shift — Quits corporate job for music passion. Characters: Garrett Scully
Location: NYC/LA
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Concert Ticket Gift — Garrett sends concert tickets as olive branch. Characters: Garrett Scully
Location: Mail
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Concert Reunion — Live performance sparks second chance. Characters: Garrett Scully
Location: LA Concert
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LA Move Announcement — Garrett reveals relocation near SF. Characters: Garrett Scully
Location: Concert Stage
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Awkward Freeze — Comedic interruption ends film. Characters: Garrett Scully, Maya
Location: Corinne's House
Erin and Garrett are very much in love. When Erin moves to San Francisco to finish her journalism degree and Garrett stays behind in New York to work in the music industry, they gamely keep the romance alive with webcams and frequent-flyer miles. But just when it seems the lovers will soon be reunited, they each score a big break that could separate them for good.