Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Burning Commission
Victor Papas is murdered, prompting wealthy businessman E.J. Hume to hire private detective Shamus McCoy. McCoy begins investigating Papas' background with the help of his informant Springy.
Key Events
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Papas Murdered — Victor Papas and his girlfriend are burned alive at home. Characters: Felix
Location: Papas' Home
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Hume's Commission — Hume hires McCoy to find stolen diamonds and killers. Characters: Shamus McCoy, E.J. Hume
Location: Hume's Office
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Investigation Begins — McCoy uses informant Springy to research Papas' background. Characters: Shamus McCoy
Location: McCoy's Apartment
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River Edge Connection — McCoy discovers Papas worked for River Edge Export. Characters: Shamus McCoy
Location: McCoy's Apartment
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Health Club Bar — Bar where Papas had connections and Felix meets Alexis. Characters: Felix
Location: Health Club Bar
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Stolen Diamonds — Million-dollar diamonds stolen by Papas and Felix. Characters: Felix
Location: Unknown
Weapons and Whispers
McCoy interrogates bar bouncer Bolton and visits Felix Montaigne, uncovering River Edge Export's illegal arms trade. A warehouse break-in leads to a deadly ambush by assassins.
Key Events
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Bolton Interrogation — McCoy ambushes and beats bar bouncer Bolton for info. Characters: Shamus McCoy
Location: Health Club Bar
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Felix Confession — Felix admits Papas worked for him but hides his role. Characters: Shamus McCoy, Felix
Location: Felix's Apartment
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Alexis's Request — Alexis asks McCoy to investigate her brother Felix. Characters: Shamus McCoy
Location: McCoy's Apartment
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Warehouse Break-in — McCoy sneaks into warehouse, finds weapons and a corpse. Characters: Shamus McCoy
Location: River Edge Warehouse
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Assassin Ambush — McCoy escapes trio of assassins at the warehouse. Characters: Shamus McCoy
Location: River Edge Warehouse
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Health Club Bar — Bar where Papas had connections and Felix meets Alexis. Characters: Felix
Location: Health Club Bar
Betrayal and Blood
McCoy realizes Hume's corruption and visits Colonel Hardcore, who is promptly assassinated. Springy is also killed, raising the stakes as McCoy infiltrates Hume's mansion.
Key Events
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Assassin Ambush — McCoy escapes trio of assassins at the warehouse. Characters: Shamus McCoy
Location: River Edge Warehouse
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Hume's Involvement — McCoy learns Hume funds River Edge and quits. Characters: Shamus McCoy
Location: McCoy's Apartment
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Hardcore Visit — McCoy questions Hardcore about illegal arms sales. Characters: Shamus McCoy
Location: Army Weapons Depot
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Hardcore Assassination — Hardcore is shot dead by Hume's hitmen. Location: Street Outside Depot
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Springy's Death — Springy is murdered by unknown parties. Location: Unknown
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Mansion Infiltration — McCoy breaks into Hume's mansion to confront him. Characters: Shamus McCoy
Location: Hume's Mansion
Climax at the Mansion
McCoy confronts Hume, escapes capture, and discovers Felix dying. He defeats Hume's henchmen, stops Hume's escape, and secures his arrest as the police arrive.
Key Events
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Mansion Infiltration — McCoy breaks into Hume's mansion to confront him. Characters: Shamus McCoy
Location: Hume's Mansion
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Dog Attack & Capture — McCoy is bitten and captured by Hume's men. Characters: Shamus McCoy, E.J. Hume
Location: Hume's Mansion
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Felix's Fate — McCoy finds Felix beaten and dying in a room. Characters: Shamus McCoy, Felix
Location: Hume's Mansion
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Final Escape — McCoy escapes while Felix is shot dead. Characters: Shamus McCoy, Felix
Location: Hume's Mansion
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Minion Subduing — McCoy fights and defeats Hume's henchmen. Characters: Shamus McCoy
Location: Hume's Mansion
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Car Chase & Arrest — McCoy stops Hume's escape car; police arrive. Characters: Shamus McCoy, E.J. Hume
Location: Mansion Driveway
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Case Closed — Hume is arrested; McCoy's investigation concludes. Characters: Shamus McCoy, E.J. Hume
Location: Mansion Exterior
Millions in diamonds are stolen from a New York City safe, and later the burglar is killed. Shamus is paid $10,000 by the owner to find the diamonds or the killer.