Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Fictitious Setup
Four older women create a fake dating profile and enjoy receiving letters from suitors. Their lighthearted prank introduces the central conceit of the narrative.
Key Events
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Ladies Gather for Lunch — Four middle-class women meet and engage in casual conversation. Characters: Brenda
Location: Pasadena Restaurant
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Rebecca Profile Creation — The group fabricates a young woman's profile to submit to a dating service. Characters: Brenda
Location: Ladies' Home
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Suitor Letters Arrive — Multiple response letters from potential suitors begin arriving. Characters: Brenda
Location: Ladies' Home
The Stalker's Descent
A young woman escapes a dangerous date, revealing the stalker's unstable mindset. He becomes fixated on the fake profile and begins tracking its location.
Key Events
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Young Woman Escapes — A young woman flees her date Mal after he attempts to force himself on her. Characters: Brenda
Location: Street / Apartment
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Mal's Thoughts Revealed — Mal's internal struggles and dangerous difficulty relating to women are exposed. Characters: Brenda
Location: Apartment Interior
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Obsession with Rebecca — Mal becomes fixated on the fictitious Rebecca and begins tracking her. Characters: Brenda
Location: Unknown
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Phone Number Tracked — Mal successfully locates the telephone number associated with Rebecca. Characters: Brenda
Location: Mal's Location
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Bar Date Arranged — One of the ladies answers the call and agrees to a date at a bar. Characters: Brenda
Location: Local Bar
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Local Bar — The public meeting place where the mistaken identity occurs. Characters: Brenda
Location: Local Bar
The Fatal Mistake
The ladies observe the date at a bar, but the stalker mistakes a local sex worker for the fictional character. He follows her to her apartment, leading to a violent confrontation.
Key Events
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Ladies Observe Bar — The group gathers at the bar to watch who arrives for the date. Characters: Brenda
Location: Local Bar
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Mistaken Identity at Bar — Mal arrives and incorrectly identifies Brenda as Rebecca, leaving with her. Characters: Brenda
Location: Local Bar
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Arrival at Apartment — Mal and Brenda arrive at her residence after leaving the bar. Characters: Brenda
Location: Brenda's Apartment
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Demand for Money — Brenda requests payment from Mal upon entering the apartment. Characters: Brenda
Location: Brenda's Apartment
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Violent Attack — Mal becomes outraged and physically attacks Brenda in a sudden outburst. Characters: Brenda
Location: Brenda's Apartment
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Brenda's Death — The attack results in Brenda's fatal injury, concluding her storyline. Characters: Brenda
Location: Brenda's Apartment
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Local Bar — The public meeting place where the mistaken identity occurs. Characters: Brenda
Location: Local Bar
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Brenda's Apartment — The private residence where the fatal confrontation takes place. Characters: Brenda
Location: Brenda's Apartment
Consequences and Pursuit
The ladies realize their prank caused a murder and report it to the police. Their decision to investigate the stalker independently places them in immediate life-threatening danger.
Key Events
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Ladies Realize Consequences — The group connects their prank to the murder and understands the gravity of their actions. Characters: Brenda
Location: Ladies' Home
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Police Station Visit — The ladies formally report the incident and provide information to authorities. Characters: Brenda
Location: Police Station
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Independent Investigation — Determined to find answers, the ladies begin tracking Mal themselves. Characters: Brenda
Location: City Streets
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Grave Danger Encountered — Their pursuit places them directly in the path of the unstable stalker. Characters: Brenda
Location: Unknown Location
Four elderly ladies with a lot of time on their hands get the idea to create a fictional "girl" for a computer dating service. However, things take a turn for the worse when their description of the "girl" attracts a psychopath.