Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
The Fragile Certainty of Testimony
Ben challenges the prosecution's reliance on eyewitness identification by questioning Mrs. Monroe's certainty. The trial's apparent hinge is whether the jury believes the accused is the right man.
Key Events
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Eyewitness Identification Challenged — Ben challenges the prosecution's reliance on eyewitness identification. Characters: Ben Chase, Mrs. Monroe
Location: Murder trial courtroom
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Household Purchase Example — Ben asks whether Mrs. Monroe might misremember an ordinary purchase. Characters: Ben Chase, Mrs. Monroe
Location: Murder trial courtroom
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Jury Faces Identification Question — The case appears to hinge on whether the jury believes the accused is the right man. Characters: Ben Chase, Mrs. Monroe
Location: Murder trial courtroom
A Body in the Rain
Ben goes to a park for a meeting and instead finds a murdered woman. His report offers few useful clues, while the discovery may compromise his ability to act as a lawyer.
Key Events
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Ben Goes to the Park — Ben arrives at a park for a meeting but finds a murdered woman instead. Characters: Ben Chase
Location: Park
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Body Discovered — Ben finds the woman's body and calls for help. Characters: Ben Chase
Location: Park
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Limited Account to Police — Ben reports seeing a man running with a dog and two parked cars. Characters: Ben Chase
Location: Park
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Rain Obscures Details — Darkness and rain leave Ben with few useful details about what he observed. Characters: Ben Chase
Location: Park
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Witness and Lawyer Conflict — Finding the body may make Ben a witness and complicate his ability to act as a lawyer. Characters: Ben Chase
Location: Unspecified
The Dangerous Client
Ben suspects a connection to an earlier murder and investigates without disclosing everything he knows. His conversations with Martin reveal disturbing ideas and references to a hidden tunnel, but Martin remains guarded.
Key Events
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Earlier Murder Suspected — Ben suspects the person responsible may be connected to an earlier murder. Characters: Ben Chase
Location: Unspecified
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Ben Investigates in Secret — Ben tries to investigate without revealing everything he knows. Characters: Ben Chase
Location: Unspecified
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Martin Speaks of Purification — Martin speaks of removing “scum” and purifying. Characters: Ben Chase, Martin Thiel
Location: Unspecified
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Hidden Tunnel Described — Martin describes the tunnel as a legacy of an earlier version of himself. Characters: Ben Chase, Martin Thiel
Location: Hidden tunnel
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Martin Withholds His Meaning — Ben sees possible clues in Martin's private world, but Martin does not fully trust him. Characters: Ben Chase, Martin Thiel
Location: Unspecified
Records at the Clinic
Guilt over a possibly released killer hangs over the investigation. Ellen reports clinic files concerning Janet and other women, including Dr. Thiel's access to records of patients he did not treat.
Key Events
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Guilt Over a Released Man — Someone close to the investigation feels guilty that a dangerous man was released and may have killed again.
Location: Unspecified
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Ellen Finds Clinic Files — Ellen reports records of abortions and Dr. Thiel's access to records of women he did not treat. Characters: Ellen Faulkner, Janet, Martin Thiel
Location: Women's medical clinic
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Ellen Leaves Ben a Message — Ellen leaves Ben a message about the clinic files before she can explain further. Characters: Ben Chase, Ellen Faulkner
Location: Unspecified
An Unresolved Encounter
Ben returns to the clinic and finds Ellen after receiving her message. They recognize one another, but the available account ends during their tense encounter without resolving the truth or outcome.
Key Events
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Tense Clinic Encounter — Ben finds Ellen at the clinic; they recognize each other, and the account ends before the truth is resolved. Characters: Ben Chase, Ellen Faulkner
Location: Women's medical clinic