Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
An Attraction Complicated
Nick notices Suzanne and begins pursuing her, only to discover that she has two mischievous children. A failed family travel arrangement places Nick in charge of the children.
Key Events
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Nick Spots Suzanne — Nick notices Suzanne across the street and becomes interested before discovering she has two children. Characters: Nick Persons, Suzanne Kingston
Location: Portland sports shop
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A Difficult Ride Home — Nick helps Suzanne after her car develops trouble and agrees to take her home. Characters: Nick Persons, Suzanne Kingston
Location: Portland street
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Nick Meets the Children — Nick meets Lindsey and Kevin, who immediately make the situation difficult. Characters: Nick Persons, Suzanne Kingston, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston
Location: Suzanne's house
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The Trip Is Assigned — Suzanne's former husband cannot collect the children, leaving Nick responsible for their trip. Characters: Nick Persons, Suzanne Kingston, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston
Location: Suzanne's house
Disaster on the Road
Airport security and train problems force Nick, Lindsey, and Kevin into an unwanted road trip. The children learn that Nick dislikes them and respond with increasingly dangerous pranks.
Key Events
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Airport Security Disaster — Kevin hides a prohibited corkscrew in Nick's jacket, causing security to subdue Nick. Characters: Nick Persons, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston
Location: Airport
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The Train Goes Without Them — The children jump off to retrieve a cape, while Nick boards and then loses the luggage. Characters: Nick Persons, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston
Location: Train station
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The Road Trip Begins — The trio reluctantly abandons the train plan and begins driving together. Characters: Nick Persons, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston
Location: Highway
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Nick's Secret Is Heard — The children overhear Nick admit that he dislikes them and has feelings for Suzanne. Characters: Nick Persons, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston, Marty
Location: Lincoln Navigator
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The Car Lockout — Kevin fakes an asthma attack, locking Nick outside while Lindsey tries to drive. Characters: Nick Persons, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston
Location: Roadside
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The Lumberjack Crash — Lindsey drives into a statue, causing its axe to strike Nick. Characters: Nick Persons, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston
Location: Roadside lumberjack statue
A Broken Family Revealed
The children run away to their father and discover that he has lied about his absence and started another family. Nick shares his own abandonment story, allowing the trio to begin trusting one another.
Key Events
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The Woods Descent — A mistaken distress signal leads Nick to drive into the woods and down a hill. Characters: Nick Persons, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston
Location: Wooded roadside
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The Children Run Away — Lindsey and Kevin leave to visit their father, while Nick pursues them on horseback and falls off. Characters: Nick Persons, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston
Location: Railway route
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The Family Betrayal — The children discover that their father lied and has already started another family. Characters: Nick Persons, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston
Location: Former husband's house
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Nick Shares His Past — Nick tells the children that his own father abandoned him, strengthening their mutual understanding. Characters: Nick Persons, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston
Location: Roadside
Trust Through Mayhem
Nick helps Kevin obtain an inhaler and watches the children at a chaotic party. A deer attack and an accidental fire destroy the vehicle, but Nick begins responding to the children with patience and care.
Key Events
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The Inhaler Exchange — A pharmacist refills Kevin's inhaler after Nick agrees to watch the children. Characters: Nick Persons, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston, Pharmacist / Clown
Location: Children's New Year's Eve party
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Lindsey Sings Respect — Lindsey reveals her singing talent with a karaoke performance of Respect. Characters: Nick Persons, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston
Location: Children's New Year's Eve party
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The Burning Navigator — A deer attack causes Nick to lose the keys, and his attempt to hotwire the car starts a fire. Characters: Nick Persons, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston
Location: Conservation area
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Ernst Provides a Ride — With the car destroyed, Nick obtains a ride from Ernst while the children continue separately. Characters: Nick Persons, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston, Ernst
Location: Highway
Love at Midnight
The journey ends in Vancouver with a confrontation and Kevin's asthma crisis. Nick's selfless rescue convinces Suzanne that his bond with the children is genuine, leading to their New Year's kiss.
Key Events
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Ernst Provides a Ride — With the car destroyed, Nick obtains a ride from Ernst while the children continue separately. Characters: Nick Persons, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston, Ernst
Location: Highway
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Vancouver Confrontation — The road conflict ends in Vancouver, where Nick fights over the children. Characters: Nick Persons, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston
Location: Vancouver
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Kevin's Asthma Crisis — Kevin collapses during an asthma attack, and Nick revives him while Suzanne witnesses the disaster. Characters: Nick Persons, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston
Location: Vancouver street
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The Midnight Reconciliation — Encouraged by Satchel, Nick says goodbye, but Suzanne recognizes their bond and kisses him at New Year. Characters: Nick Persons, Suzanne Kingston, Lindsey Kingston, Kevin Kingston, Satchel Paige (voice)
Location: Hotel room