Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Life Going Astray
Afonya and Fedul avoid work and drink constantly. A failed relationship, rejected trainees, and Kolya's arrival show how unstable Afonya's life has become.
Key Events
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Afonya Avoids Work — Afonya and Fedul spend their time avoiding work and seeking opportunities to drink. Characters: Afonya, Fedul
Location: City work district
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Pub Drinking Session — Afonya meets Kolya in a pub, becomes drunk, and later forgets the encounter. Characters: Afonya, Kolya
Location: Pub
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Girlfriend Leaves — Afonya's girlfriend leaves after seeing him return home drunk. Characters: Afonya
Location: Afonya's home
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Trainees Are Assigned — Afonya begs for vocational trainees and receives two despite doubts about his teaching. Characters: Afonya
Location: Plumbing workplace
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Trainees Quit — After one day with Afonya, the trainees refuse to continue working with him. Characters: Afonya
Location: Plumbing workplace
A Chance Encounter
Afonya meets Katya at a dance but overlooks her affection. After a fight, Katya's concern brings further attention to his misconduct.
Key Events
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Kolya Moves In — Kolya arrives to stay with Afonya after being thrown out of his home. Characters: Afonya, Kolya
Location: Afonya's apartment
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Dance Hall Meeting — Afonya meets Katya at a dance, but pays more attention to an older woman. Characters: Afonya, Katya
Location: Dance hall
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Street Fight — A hooligan and his friends overpower Afonya after an argument at the dance. Characters: Afonya, Katya
Location: Street outside the dance hall
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Katya Calls Police — Katya calls the police because she worries about Afonya's safety. Characters: Afonya, Katya
Location: Telephone point
The False Dream
Afonya falls for Helen and tries to create excuses to visit her apartment. His fantasy of family life collapses when Helen makes clear that he is only a plumber to her.
Key Events
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Afonya Meets Helen — During a work call, Afonya meets Helen and falls in love at first sight. Characters: Afonya
Location: Helen's apartment
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Sink Exchange — Afonya swaps a new Finnish sink for an old one so he can give the new sink to Helen. Characters: Afonya
Location: Astronomer's apartment
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Dreamed Family Life — Afonya imagines a family idyll with Helen as his wife and perfect children. Characters: Afonya
Location: Afonya's dream
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Committee Threatens Dismissal — Afonya faces dismissal for drunkenness, truancy, fighting, and the missing Finnish sink. Characters: Afonya
Location: Local committee meeting
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Helen Rejects Afonya — Afonya brings a flowered porcelain sink but finds Helen with company and learns she rejects him. Characters: Afonya
Location: Helen's apartment
At The Bottom
Threatened with dismissal, Afonya drinks with Fedul and drunkenly proposes to Katya. He then returns to the village, believing he can escape his ruined city life.
Key Events
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Restaurant Despair — Afonya drinks with Fedul to escape his depression, but the attempt does not help. Characters: Afonya, Fedul
Location: Restaurant
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Drunken Marriage Proposal — In a drunken state, Afonya proposes marriage to Katya and wakes beside her the next morning. Characters: Afonya, Katya
Location: Katya's home
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Village Return — Afonya returns to his village, intending to leave the city behind and reconnect with aunt Frosya. Characters: Afonya, aunt Frosya
Location: Afonya's village
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Frosya's Death Revealed — Afonya learns that Frosya died two years earlier after waiting for him by the window. Characters: Afonya, aunt Frosya
Location: Village
The Waiting Voice
Afonya discovers that aunt Frosya died waiting for him and learns that Katya has left. At the airport, Katya unexpectedly returns and calls out to him.
Key Events
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Failed Call To Katya — Afonya tries to call Katya using her memorable number but learns that she has left. Characters: Afonya, Katya
Location: Post office
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Afonya Reaches Airport — Afonya reaches the airport without caring where he will go or what will happen. Characters: Afonya
Location: Airport
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Katya Returns — As Afonya heads toward the aircraft, Katya appears with a suitcase and calls his name. Characters: Afonya, Katya
Location: Airport runway