Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Promise of Parenthood
Virginia and Brad seek help from the highly successful fertility specialist Dr. Meyerling. Despite Virginia's fears about inherited illness, Meyerling reassures her and begins the assisted conception procedure.
Key Events
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Janet Goes Into Labor — Janet Robinson unexpectedly goes into labor during the night. Characters: Janet Robinson
Location: Unknown nighttime setting
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The Marshalls Seek Treatment — Virginia and Brad visit Meyerling after years of failed attempts to have a child. Characters: Virginia Marshall, Brad Marshall, Dr. Richard Meyerling
Location: Dr. Meyerling's office
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Fear of Heredity — Virginia worries that mental illness or inherited problems could affect the baby. Characters: Virginia Marshall, Brad Marshall, Dr. Richard Meyerling
Location: Dr. Meyerling's office
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Meyerling Gives Reassurance — Meyerling says there is no hereditary madness in Virginia's blood. Characters: Virginia Marshall, Dr. Richard Meyerling
Location: Dr. Meyerling's office
Families Around the Procedure
The Marshalls remain connected to other couples associated with Meyerling's treatments. Virginia also meets Connie Chicago and continues writing a children's book about fear, evil, and death.
Key Events
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Assisted Conception Begins — The couple agrees to Meyerling's assisted conception procedure. Characters: Virginia Marshall, Brad Marshall, Dr. Richard Meyerling
Location: Dr. Meyerling's medical facility
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Connected Fertility Couples — The Marshalls remain close to couples who benefited from Meyerling. Characters: Virginia Marshall, Brad Marshall, Jeff DeWitt, Alicia DeWitt
Location: Social setting
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The DeWitt Children Discussed — Alicia DeWitt and the other DeWitt child are discussed within the connected families. Characters: Virginia Marshall, Brad Marshall, Jeff DeWitt, Alicia DeWitt
Location: Social setting
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Virginia Meets Connie — Virginia meets pregnant Connie Chicago during the childbirth-class period. Characters: Virginia Marshall, Connie Chicago
Location: Childbirth class
The Genetic Warning
Connie reveals that she distrusts Meyerling and suspects he is conducting genetic research. Her abnormal chromosome results and subsequent coma intensify Virginia's fear.
Key Events
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The Magic Window — Virginia works on a children's book about fear, evil, and death. Characters: Virginia Marshall
Location: Virginia's writing space
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Connie Questions Meyerling — Connie tells Virginia that Meyerling may be a genetic researcher. Characters: Virginia Marshall, Connie Chicago, Dr. Richard Meyerling
Location: Childbirth class
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Abnormal Test Results — Connie reports an abnormal chromosome count and plans further investigation. Characters: Connie Chicago, Virginia Marshall
Location: Childbirth class
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Connie Falls Into Coma — Connie is found in a coma before she can meet Virginia again. Characters: Connie Chicago, Virginia Marshall
Location: Unknown medical setting
A Pregnancy Turned Hostile
Virginia suffers frightening physical and psychological disturbances and becomes convinced that the fetus is not human. She blames Meyerling for changing the baby and secretly decides to terminate the pregnancy.
Key Events
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Virginia Experiences Disturbances — Virginia experiences terrifying physical and psychological disturbances. Characters: Virginia Marshall, Brad Marshall
Location: The Marshalls' home
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The Fetus Feels Nonhuman — Virginia believes something inside her is growing and attacking her body. Characters: Virginia Marshall
Location: The Marshalls' home
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Virginia Accuses Meyerling — Virginia says Meyerling changed the baby and that her body fights it like a disease. Characters: Virginia Marshall, Dr. Richard Meyerling
Location: Virginia's home
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Secret Abortion Decision — Virginia decides the pregnancy must end without telling Brad beforehand. Characters: Virginia Marshall, Brad Marshall
Location: The Marshalls' home
The Unresolved Intervention
A hospital refuses to perform the procedure because Virginia is too far along. She seeks an underground abortionist, but panic erupts when the instruments appear and the account ends without resolving the outcome.
Key Events
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Hospital Refuses Procedure — A hospital refuses because Virginia is too far along and recommends counseling. Characters: Virginia Marshall
Location: Hospital
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Virginia Seeks Underground Help — Virginia turns to an underground abortionist after the hospital refusal. Characters: Virginia Marshall
Location: Underground abortionist's facility
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Instruments Are Prepared — The abortionist begins preparing Virginia for the attempted intervention. Characters: Virginia Marshall
Location: Underground abortionist's facility
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Virginia Panics — Virginia screams that women are being used and children are being changed. Characters: Virginia Marshall
Location: Underground abortionist's facility