Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Broken Typewriter
A typewriter is thrown from the apartment, and Marie recounts the anger behind the act. Bruce's tears over the machine prompt her decision to leave him.
Key Events
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Typewriter Falls from Window — A typewriter flies from an apartment window, breaks on the sidewalk, and is collected by a garbage truck.
Location: Apartment building sidewalk
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Marie Explains the Outburst — Marie says she threw the typewriter after its noise angered her the previous evening. Characters: Marie, Bruce
Location: Apartment
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Marie Addresses the Audience — Marie breaks the fourth wall and narrates with hate-filled language. Characters: Marie
Location: Unspecified
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Bruce Uses Endearments — Marie speaks sarcastically while Bruce continues using terms of endearment. Characters: Marie, Bruce
Location: Apartment
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Bruce Cries over the Typewriter — Bruce cries in Marie's arms over the typewriter. Characters: Marie, Bruce
Location: Apartment
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Marie Decides to Leave — After Bruce cries, Marie decides she will leave him. Characters: Marie, Bruce
Location: Apartment
Separate Social Worlds
Bruce leaves for lunch and shares an oddly flirtatious exchange with a male friend. Meanwhile, Marie is led by a retriever through a door into a field.
Key Events
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Insults Meet Indifference — Marie heaps verbal invective on Bruce, who seems oblivious to it. Characters: Marie, Bruce
Location: Apartment
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Bruce Leaves for Lunch — Bruce leaves for a lunch date with a male friend. Characters: Bruce
Location: Unspecified
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Strange Lunch Flirtation — Bruce and his friend act flirtatiously over mundane conversation, then part stiffly. Characters: Bruce
Location: Lunch venue
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Retriever Befriends Marie — A Golden Retriever befriends Marie and leads her toward a door. Characters: Marie
Location: Unspecified
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Door Opens to a Field — The retriever leads Marie through a door that opens onto a grassy field. Characters: Marie
Location: Grassy field
The Dreamlike Interlude
The field becomes an ocean, and the retriever wakes Marie before she heads to a party. There, Bruce socializes while Marie is neglected and drifts through repeated dreams and conversations.
Key Events
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Marie Sleeps in the Field — Marie falls asleep in the field. Characters: Marie
Location: Grassy field
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Field Becomes Ocean Waves — The field transforms into waves that slowly envelop Marie. Characters: Marie
Location: Ocean
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Retriever Wakes Marie — The retriever licks Marie awake, and she heads to the party. Characters: Marie
Location: Ocean
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Marie Arrives at the Party — The host greets Marie, but she is mostly ignored afterward. Characters: Marie
Location: Party
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Bruce Socializes at the Party — Bruce arrives and moves among the guests, spending little time with Marie. Characters: Marie, Bruce
Location: Party
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Marie Dreams at the Party — Tired, Marie rests where Bruce suggests and repeatedly dreams and wakes to mundane conversations. Characters: Marie, Bruce
Location: Party
Dinner and the Unsettled Future
A dream brings Bruce's fantasy into view. At the restaurant, Marie voices her contempt, and Bruce answers their discussion of the future with a gift for the house.
Key Events
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Bruce Reveals a Fantasy — In a dream, Bruce tells Marie he fantasized about a young woman and watched a woman undress from a rented room. Characters: Marie, Bruce
Location: Dream
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Restaurant Confrontation — Marie expresses her verbal contempt for Bruce, but it has little apparent effect. Characters: Marie, Bruce
Location: Restaurant
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Gift and Future Discussion — They discuss their future, and Bruce surprises Marie with a gift for the house. Characters: Marie, Bruce
Location: Restaurant