Story Structure — 6 Plot Phases
Return Under Suspicion
Walter returns to Philadelphia after twelve years in prison and finds that most friends and family have abandoned him. Carlos remains connected to him, while the school across from his apartment becomes a source of danger.
Key Events
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Walter Returns Home — Walter returns to Philadelphia after twelve years in prison, with Carlos as his only continuing connection. Characters: Walter, Carlos
Location: Philadelphia
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Apartment Near School — Walter lives directly across from an elementary school, creating an immediate source of temptation. Characters: Walter
Location: Walter's apartment
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Mill Job Begins — Walter starts work at a lumber mill and meets Vicki and Mary-Kay. Characters: Walter, Vicki, Mary-Kay
Location: Local lumber mill
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Walter Meets Vicki — Walter and Vicki become sexually involved after meeting at the mill. Characters: Walter, Vicki
Location: Local lumber mill
Confession and Temptation
Walter starts work at the lumber mill and becomes involved with Vicki. His confession about molesting girls shocks her, while Walter begins watching Candy near the school.
Key Events
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Walter Meets Vicki — Walter and Vicki become sexually involved after meeting at the mill. Characters: Walter, Vicki
Location: Local lumber mill
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Confession After Sex — Walter tells Vicki that he molested girls and insists that he did not hurt them. Characters: Walter, Vicki
Location: Walter's apartment
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Candy Watches Boys — Walter sees Candy offering candy to boys and suspects he is another child molester. Characters: Walter, Candy
Location: Across from the elementary school
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Robin Enters Walter's Life — Walter meets Robin, a lonely young birdwatcher. Characters: Walter, Robin
Location: Neighborhood
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A Boy Is Abducted — Walter sees Candy abduct a boy but does not report the incident to police. Characters: Walter, Candy
Location: Near the elementary school
Exposure and Isolation
Candy's apparent crime remains unreported, and Mary-Kay publicly exposes Walter's police record. Workplace hostility drives Walter away, while Vicki searches for him.
Key Events
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A Boy Is Abducted — Walter sees Candy abduct a boy but does not report the incident to police. Characters: Walter, Candy
Location: Near the elementary school
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Record Exposed Publicly — Mary-Kay posts Walter's police record where the mill employees can see it. Characters: Walter, Mary-Kay
Location: Lumber mill bulletin board
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Mill Employees Attack — Employees attack Walter while Vicki and the mill boss defend him. Characters: Walter, Mary-Kay, Vicki
Location: Local lumber mill
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Walter Leaves Work — Ostracized and frustrated, Walter leaves the mill and goes toward the park. Characters: Walter, Vicki
Location: Road from the lumber mill
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Vicki Searches for Walter — Vicki searches for Walter because she fears the worst after he leaves work. Characters: Vicki, Walter
Location: Philadelphia
Robin's Pain
Walter meets Robin in the park and momentarily approaches a dangerous boundary. Robin's disclosure of abuse forces Walter to understand the pain he caused his victims.
Key Events
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Vicki Searches for Walter — Vicki searches for Walter because she fears the worst after he leaves work. Characters: Vicki, Walter
Location: Philadelphia
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Park Conversation — Walter and Robin talk privately in the park about her life and loneliness. Characters: Walter, Robin
Location: Park
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Robin Refuses His Lap — Walter invites Robin onto his lap, but she politely refuses. Characters: Walter, Robin
Location: Park
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Robin Reveals Abuse — Robin cries and reveals that her father molests her, prompting Walter to recognize his victims' pain. Characters: Walter, Robin
Location: Park
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Walter Sets a Boundary — When Robin offers him approval, Walter tells her to go home; she gives him a hug. Characters: Walter, Robin
Location: Park
Violence and Accountability
Walter sees Candy with another boy and beats him in rage and self-hatred. Vicki accepts Walter, but his past violence and the consequences of his crimes remain unresolved.
Key Events
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Walter Sets a Boundary — When Robin offers him approval, Walter tells her to go home; she gives him a hug. Characters: Walter, Robin
Location: Park
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Candy Drops Off a Boy — At night, Walter sees Candy dropping off a young boy near the school. Characters: Walter, Candy
Location: Near the elementary school
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Walter Beats Candy — In rage and self-hatred, Walter attacks Candy after seeing him with the boy. Characters: Walter, Candy
Location: Across from the elementary school
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Vicki Accepts Walter — Walter goes to Vicki's home, and she accepts him after the confrontation with Candy. Characters: Walter, Vicki
Location: Vicki's home
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Packing for a New Home — Walter packs to move in with Vicki when the police investigation reaches him. Characters: Walter, Vicki
Location: Walter's apartment
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The Assault Is Understood — The boy's description fits Walter, while Candy is revealed as wanted for raping a boy in Virginia. Characters: Walter, Candy
Location: Walter's apartment
A Difficult Future
Carlos helps Walter attempt a family reunion, but his sister refuses forgiveness. Walter accepts that reconciliation may take years and expresses guarded optimism.
Key Events
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The Assault Is Understood — The boy's description fits Walter, while Candy is revealed as wanted for raping a boy in Virginia. Characters: Walter, Candy
Location: Walter's apartment
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Carlos Arranges Reunion — Carlos helps Walter reunite with his estranged sister, who refuses to forgive him and leaves. Characters: Walter, Carlos
Location: Philadelphia
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Walter Accepts the Future — Walter accepts that forgiveness may take years and expresses cautious optimism about his future. Characters: Walter
Location: Therapy setting
After twelve years in prison, Walter returns home. His family has abandoned him, save for his brother-in-law. Few know he's a sex offender and pedophile. Walter finds an apartment and is regularly visited by his parole officer. He gets a job at a lumber mill and starts seeing a coworker. Then his new world begins to unravel; as his past becomes known, he strikes up a high-risk friendship with a young girl and realizes that a man loitering near a schoolyard is a child molester prowling for his next victim.