Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
The Tour and the Scheme
Entertainers Tommy and Susie Barton travel together when Tommy arrives to solicit funds for a time travel venture. Susie confronts them at their apartment, leading to the exposure of Tommy's valet status and a frantic police chase.
Key Events
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Tour Introduction — Entertainers Bill and Susie Barton are on tour when Tommy arrives. Characters: Tommy, Susie Barton
Location: Tour Bus
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Funding Request — Tommy solicits funds for Time Ferry Services Limited. Characters: Tommy, Susie Barton
Location: Tour Stop
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Money Demand — Susie demands the $10,000 given for the Time Ball invention. Characters: Susie Barton, Tommy, The Professor
Location: Lavish Apartment
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Valet Exposed — Tommy is revealed as a valet borrowing clothes and apartment. Characters: Tommy, The Professor
Location: Apartment
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Police Pursuit — The employer calls the police, forcing the group to flee. Characters: Tommy, Susie Barton, The Professor
Location: Apartment Hallway
Accidental Time Travel
The group hides inside the Time Ball to escape the police, but Tommy accidentally activates the machine. They arrive in Elizabethan London, where Tommy begins deceiving the royal court while the Professor is arrested as a spy.
Key Events
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Police Pursuit — The employer calls the police, forcing the group to flee. Characters: Tommy, Susie Barton, The Professor
Location: Apartment Hallway
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Time Ball Hiding — The group hides inside the primitive time machine. Characters: Tommy, Susie Barton, The Professor
Location: Time Ball
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Accidental Activation — Tommy closes the hatch, accidentally activating the invention. Characters: Tommy, Susie Barton, The Professor
Location: Time Ball
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Arrival in London — The group is sent back in time to Elizabethan London. Characters: Tommy, Susie Barton, The Professor
Location: Elizabethan London
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Court Deception — Tommy befriends the Queen and starts a land swindle. Characters: Tommy, Queen Elizabeth
Location: Royal Court
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Professor Arrested — The Professor is jailed as a Scottish spy, trapping the group. Characters: The Professor, Queen Elizabeth
Location: Tower of London
Shakespeare and the Impostors
Susie encounters William Shakespeare and inadvertently inspires his writing. She then steals identities to gain an audience with Queen Elizabeth, hoping to secure the Professor's pardon, but the deception is quickly uncovered.
Key Events
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Professor Arrested — The Professor is jailed as a Scottish spy, trapping the group. Characters: The Professor, Queen Elizabeth
Location: Tower of London
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Shakespeare Encounter — Susie meets Shakespeare and feeds him his own lines. Characters: Susie Barton, William Shakespeare
Location: London Tavern
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Identity Theft — Susie and Bill steal identities to gain an audience with the queen. Characters: Susie Barton, The Professor, Tommy
Location: Tavern
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Audience Attempt — The group attempts to petition the queen for the Professor's pardon. Characters: Susie Barton, Queen Elizabeth
Location: Royal Palace
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Unmasking — The impostors are unmasked before the queen. Characters: Susie Barton, The Professor, Tommy, Queen Elizabeth
Location: Royal Palace
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Death Sentence — All three are sentenced to be executed alongside the Professor. Characters: Susie Barton, The Professor, Tommy, Queen Elizabeth
Location: Royal Palace
Execution and Paradox
The unmasked group faces a death sentence and is targeted for burning inside the Time Ball. The Professor repairs the machine, allowing them to return to the modern day, but they arrive too early and fade away due to a temporal paradox.
Key Events
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Death Sentence — All three are sentenced to be executed alongside the Professor. Characters: Susie Barton, The Professor, Tommy, Queen Elizabeth
Location: Royal Palace
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Execution Attempt — Soldiers try to burn the group alive inside the machine. Characters: Susie Barton, The Professor, Tommy, Queen Elizabeth
Location: Time Ball
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Machine Repaired — The Professor quickly fixes the device during the attack. Characters: The Professor, Susie Barton, Tommy
Location: Time Ball
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Return to Present — The group successfully returns to the modern era. Characters: Susie Barton, The Professor, Tommy
Location: Modern Day
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Temporal Paradox — They arrive weeks too early and begin fading from existence. Characters: Susie Barton, The Professor, Tommy
Location: Modern Day
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Final Disappearance — The temporal paradox completes, erasing them from reality. Characters: Susie Barton, The Professor, Tommy
Location: Modern Day
The Professor (Felix Aylmer) is showing Susie (Evelyn Dall) around his time machine when it accidently takes off with Tommy (Tommy Handley) and Bill (George Moon) also on board. They are transported to Elizabethan England where they come across Walter Raleigh, William Shakespeare, Queen Elizabeth 1, Captain John Smith and Pocohontas. Will our time travellers return?