Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Heart Stuck in New York
Mike struggles in Los Angeles after a six-year relationship ends. Rob listens to his pain, while Mike remains unable to accept the silence from his former girlfriend.
Key Events
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Mike Confides in Rob — Mike tells Rob he desperately misses his former girlfriend and feels hurt that she has not called. Characters: Mike Peters, Rob
Location: Los Angeles
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Rob Explains Silence — Rob suggests that women avoid calling ex-boyfriends until they have fully moved on. Characters: Mike Peters, Rob
Location: Los Angeles
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Trip to Las Vegas — Mike is coaxed into an impromptu Las Vegas trip intended to interrupt his depression. Characters: Mike Peters
Location: Road to Las Vegas
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Las Vegas Pickup Attempt — The trip produces a social opportunity, but Mike remains emotionally focused on his former relationship. Characters: Mike Peters
Location: Las Vegas
Distraction Fails in Vegas
Mike's friends try to pull him into social activity through an impulsive Las Vegas trip. His continuing fixation on the past prevents the trip from becoming a romantic success.
Key Events
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Mike Ruins the Date — Mike talks about his former girlfriend during a date, spoiling the developing mood. Characters: Mike Peters
Location: Las Vegas
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Return to Los Angeles — Mike returns to Los Angeles and resumes spending time with his circle of aspiring entertainers. Characters: Mike Peters, Rob, Sue
Location: Los Angeles
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Friends Pursue Entertainment — The group plays golf and video games while trying to establish entertainment careers. Characters: Mike Peters, Rob, Sue
Location: Los Angeles
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Night of Bar Hopping — Mike and his friends move through bars, a party, and an after-hours venue. Characters: Mike Peters, Rob, Sue
Location: Los Angeles nightlife
A Dangerous Night Out
Back in Los Angeles, Mike joins his friends for entertainment, nightlife, and social experimentation. He meets Nikki, but a parking-lot incident and Sue's criticism expose his unresolved emotional problems.
Key Events
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Night of Bar Hopping — Mike and his friends move through bars, a party, and an after-hours venue. Characters: Mike Peters, Rob, Sue
Location: Los Angeles nightlife
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Mike Studies Social Confidence — Mike watches his friend confidently handle social interactions and gains encouragement to participate. Characters: Mike Peters, Rob, Sue
Location: After-hours venue
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Mike Meets Nikki — Mike approaches Nikki and receives her phone number. Characters: Mike Peters, Nikki
Location: After-hours venue
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Parking Lot Threat — Several thugs accost Sue, who draws a gun and scares them and the nearby friends. Characters: Mike Peters, Rob, Sue
Location: Parking lot
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Sue Challenges Mike — Sue ridicules Mike's obsession with his ex, prompting him to reconsider his behavior. Characters: Mike Peters, Sue
Location: Parking lot
Rejection and the Lowest Point
Mike responds to Nikki with desperate late-night calls and is firmly rejected. His renewed despair makes him consider returning to New York before Rob consoles him.
Key Events
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Desperate Calls to Nikki — Mike leaves increasingly desperate late-night messages for Nikki. Characters: Mike Peters, Nikki
Location: Mike's apartment
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Nikki Rejects Mike — Nikki answers and tells Mike never to call her again. Characters: Mike Peters, Nikki
Location: Mike's apartment
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Mike Considers New York — After the rejection, Mike misses his former girlfriend more intensely and considers returning to New York. Characters: Mike Peters
Location: Mike's apartment
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Rob Consoles Mike — Rob visits Mike and consoles him during his lowest emotional point. Characters: Mike Peters, Rob
Location: Mike's apartment
Dancing into Tomorrow
At The Derby, Mike finds the courage to approach Lorraine, who shares his experience of starting over after a relationship. Her call helps him choose a new direction instead of returning to the past.
Key Events
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Swing Night at The Derby — Mike goes out for swing night and notices Lorraine across the venue. Characters: Mike Peters, Lorraine
Location: The Derby
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Mike Dances with Lorraine — Mike gathers courage, approaches Lorraine, and dances swing with her after discussing their recent breakups. Characters: Mike Peters, Lorraine
Location: The Derby
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Mike Chooses the Present — Mike realizes he no longer misses his former girlfriend and ends their call to pursue Lorraine. Characters: Mike Peters, Lorraine
Location: Mike's apartment
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Friends Meet at Coffee Shop — Mike observes that his life is moving forward while his friend remains emotionally stuck in the past. Characters: Mike Peters, Rob, Sue
Location: Coffee shop
After 6 years together, Mike's girlfriend leaves him, so he travels to LA to be a star. Six months on, he's still not doing very well— so a few of his friends try to reconnect him to the social scene and hopefully help him forget his failed relationship.