Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Coast Before Buzzz Cola
The story recalls a time when surfers ruled the coast before pollution and Buzzz Cola became threats. Menlo is introduced as a genius who hates surfers.
Key Events
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Surfers Rule the Coast — The opening recalls an earlier era when surfers ruled the coast.
Location: The coast
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Pollution Threat Emerges — The former surfing era gives way to threats from pollution and nuclear waste.
Location: The coast
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Buzzz Cola Threat — The narration identifies Buzzz Cola as a new horror threatening the coast.
Location: The coast
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Menlo Hates Surfers — Menlo is introduced as a high school genius who hates surfers. Characters: Menlo Schwartzer
Location: Menlo's secret laboratory
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Revenge Takes Shape — A cruel practical joke drives Menlo toward revenge against surfers. Characters: Menlo Schwartzer
Location: Menlo's secret underwater laboratory
Menlo's Chemical Revenge
A cruel practical joke drives Menlo toward revenge. In his underwater laboratory, he creates an addictive chemical agent and receives Sparkle's reluctant help.
Key Events
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Revenge Takes Shape — A cruel practical joke drives Menlo toward revenge against surfers. Characters: Menlo Schwartzer
Location: Menlo's secret underwater laboratory
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Chemical Agent Invented — Menlo concocts an addictive chemical agent for his anti-surfer plan. Characters: Menlo Schwartzer
Location: Menlo's secret underwater laboratory
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Sparkle Joins Reluctantly — Sparkle, identified as Menlo's girlfriend, gives reluctant help to the operation. Characters: Menlo Schwartzer, Sparkle / Florinda Budnick
Location: Menlo's secret underwater laboratory
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Business Deal Begins — Menlo involves local soda businessmen in distributing his product. Characters: Menlo Schwartzer
Location: The local business community
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Buzzz Cola Distributed — Menlo and his helpers distribute the chemical agent disguised as Buzzz Cola. Characters: Menlo Schwartzer, Sparkle / Florinda Budnick
Location: The coast
The Zombie Drink Spreads
Menlo works with soda businessmen to distribute the chemical as Buzzz Cola. Drinkers mutate into garbage-ingesting zombie punks, allowing Menlo to build an army.
Key Events
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Drinkers Mutate — Drinkers become mutated, garbage-ingesting zombie punks. Characters: Menlo Schwartzer
Location: The coast
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Zombie Army Grows — Menlo builds an army of brainless zombie slaves to do his bidding. Characters: Menlo Schwartzer
Location: The coast
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Friends Fall Victim — Several of Chuck and Bob's friends fall victim to Buzzz Cola. Characters: Chuck, Bob
Location: The coast
Surfers Decode The Scheme
After several friends become victims, Chuck and Bob investigate the Buzzz Cola plot. The police and their spaced-out parents provide no effective help.
Key Events
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Chuck Investigates — Chuck and Bob begin piecing together the evidence of Menlo's evil scheme. Characters: Chuck, Bob
Location: The coast
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Police Offer Little Help — The two surfers find no effective help from the bumbling local police force. Characters: Chuck, Bob
Location: The local police force
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Parents Fail Them — Their spaced-out parents also fail to provide useful assistance. Characters: Chuck, Bob
Location: Their local community
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Science Help Sought — Chuck and Bob enlist the services of an eccentric science teacher. Characters: Chuck, Bob
Location: The science teacher's setting
Race Against The Contest
Chuck and Bob enlist an eccentric science teacher and commit themselves to stopping Menlo. Their personal chance to compete in the big surf contest raises the stakes.
Key Events
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Menlo's Scheme Exposed — The surfers connect Menlo's revenge, the chemical drink, and the zombie army. Characters: Menlo Schwartzer, Chuck, Bob
Location: The coast
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Contest Deadline Looms — They must stop Menlo or lose the chance to compete in the weekend surf contest. Characters: Chuck, Bob
Location: The big surf contest
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Vow To Stop Menlo — Chuck and Bob vow to stop Menlo for good despite the escalating threat. Characters: Chuck, Bob, Menlo Schwartzer
Location: The coast
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Coastwide Stakes — The conflict centers on preventing Menlo's Buzzz Cola revenge from ruling the coast. Characters: Menlo Schwartzer, Sparkle / Florinda Budnick, Chuck, Bob
Location: The coast