Story Structure — 4 Plot Phases
Grief and Departure
Donnelly receives devastating news of his wife's death at the hospital and boards a train home. He sits opposite a foul-mouthed kid, marking the beginning of an unexpected journey.
Key Events
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Hospital Death Notification — Doctor informs Donnelly of his wife's death and shows him her body. Characters: Donnelly, Doctor
Location: Hospital
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Train Boarding — Donnelly boards the train and finds a seat opposite a foul-mouthed kid. Characters: Donnelly
Location: Train
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Initial Train Interaction — Donnelly tolerates the kid's chain-smoking and engages in inane conversation. Characters: Donnelly, Kid
Location: Train
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Couple's Discomfort — A couple across the aisle openly criticizes the kid's abrasive behavior. Characters: Man, Man, Kid
Location: Train
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Buffet Tea Exchange — Kid mocks Donnelly when asked for tea but refuses his money. Characters: Kid, Donnelly
Location: Train Buffet
Train Tensions
A grieving couple clashes with the kid over his abrasive behavior and insensitive remarks. The situation escalates when the kid's crude joke triggers the woman to jump from the moving train.
Key Events
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Buffet Tea Exchange — Kid mocks Donnelly when asked for tea but refuses his money. Characters: Kid, Donnelly
Location: Train Buffet
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Shared Grief Revelation — Donnelly tells the kid about his wife's death; kid responds with nihilistic views. Characters: Donnelly, Kid
Location: Train
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Couple Returns — Husband nearly fights kid over his language; Donnelly intervenes. Characters: Man, Man, Kid
Location: Train
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Crude Joke Incident — Kid makes a vulgar comment about the woman's dead baby, causing her to trip. Characters: Kid, Man
Location: Train
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Woman Jumps Train — Woman steps onto the table, trips, and jumps out the open door. Characters: Man, Kid
Location: Train Exterior
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Emergency Stop — Kid reveals wife jumped; Donnelly sees blood, pulls emergency stop. Characters: Donnelly, Kid, Man
Location: Train
Shared Despair
Police arrive and question the passengers. The kid confesses to murdering his mother, while Donnelly shares his own loss. They bond over dark humor and storytelling before the train stops.
Key Events
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Emergency Stop — Kid reveals wife jumped; Donnelly sees blood, pulls emergency stop. Characters: Donnelly, Kid, Man
Location: Train
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Police Arrival — Police board, question Donnelly and kid; policeman recognizes kid. Characters: Donnelly, Kid, Man
Location: Train Platform
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Train Departs — Policeman orders train stopped and guns drawn as kid waves goodbye. Characters: Kid
Location: Train
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Matricide Confession — Kid chides Donnelly's mood, reveals he murdered his mother, and expresses no mourning. Characters: Kid, Donnelly
Location: Train
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Grief Bonding — Donnelly weeps over his wife's death; kid tells a bizarre cow story, making Donnelly laugh. Characters: Donnelly, Kid
Location: Train
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Station Arrival — Train arrives; armed police surround the area; kid realizes Donnelly knows his secret. Characters: Donnelly, Kid
Location: Train Station
Violent Reckoning
Armed police ambush the station, triggering a fatal shootout that kills the kid. Donnelly returns home, attempts suicide, kills his pet rabbit instead, and ultimately finds reluctant peace.
Key Events
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Station Arrival — Train arrives; armed police surround the area; kid realizes Donnelly knows his secret. Characters: Donnelly, Kid
Location: Train Station
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Shootout Begins — Kid draws two revolvers and opens fire on the surrounding policemen. Characters: Kid
Location: Train Station
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Kid Mortally Wounded — Kid is hit by return fire; Donnelly crawls to him as he dies. Characters: Kid, Donnelly
Location: Train Station
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Gun Acquisition — Donnelly takes one of the kid's six shooters and hides it in his coat. Characters: Donnelly
Location: Train Station
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Home Preparation — Donnelly inspects the gun, finds two bullets, and prepares to shoot himself. Characters: Donnelly
Location: Donnelly's Home
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Rabbit's Death — Hearing scratching, Donnelly shoots his pet rabbit David instead of himself. Characters: Donnelly
Location: Donnelly's Home
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Gun Drops — Donnelly points gun at himself but drops it; it discharges the last bullet. Characters: Donnelly
Location: Donnelly's Home
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Final Resignation — Donnelly sighs, looks skyward, and accepts the day's tragedy without suicide. Characters: Donnelly
Location: Donnelly's Home
Overwhelmed by grief following the death of his wife, Donnelly shares a train carriage home with a troubled young man identified only as the 'Kid'. As the Kid becomes more agitated and foul-mouthed, the journey takes on a violent and dangerous hue – for the bereaved Donnelly and for other hapless passengers on the train. Academy Award Winner: Best Live Action Short Film – 2005