Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Baptismal Past Revisited
Gonzalo returns to the church where he was baptized and received his First Communion. He requests his baptismal certificate so he can begin the process of apostasy.
Key Events
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Return To The Church — Gonzalo returns to the church connected to his baptism and First Communion. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: The church where Gonzalo was baptized
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Childhood Religious Identity — The church visit forces Gonzalo to confront an identity imposed during childhood. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: The church
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Certificate Request — Gonzalo asks for a copy of his baptismal certificate to begin apostasy. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: The church
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Beginning The Apostasy Process — His request formally begins his attempt to leave the Catholic Church. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: The church
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Writing About Apostasy — Gonzalo writes about the apostasy procedure and his personal circumstances. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Gonzalo's home
A Life Losing Its Balance
Gonzalo writes about apostasy and missing a former friend while his current life becomes unsettled. His relationship with Pilar, Carlos's involvement in the tension, academic failures, criticism, and family disappointment compound his distress.
Key Events
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Writing About Apostasy — Gonzalo writes about the apostasy procedure and his personal circumstances. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Gonzalo's home
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Missing A Madrid Friend — Gonzalo writes about missing a friend who once lived in Madrid. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Gonzalo's home
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Unsettled Present Life — Gonzalo's present life becomes increasingly unstable. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Gonzalo's home
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Complicated Relationship — Gonzalo's relationship with Pilar remains complicated. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo, Pilar
Location: Gonzalo's daily surroundings
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Carlos Adds Tension — Carlos remains part of the tension surrounding Gonzalo and Pilar. Characters: Carlos, Pilar
Location: Gonzalo's social surroundings
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Instability At Home And Work — Gonzalo struggles to find stability at home and at work. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Home and workplace
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Repeated Academic Failures — Gonzalo faces repeated academic failures. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Academic setting
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Professor's Criticism — A professor criticizes Gonzalo as his academic difficulties continue. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Academic setting
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Family Disappointment — Gonzalo faces his family's disappointment over his difficulties. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Gonzalo's home
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Troubling Childhood Memories — Gonzalo recalls troubling incidents from his childhood. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Gonzalo's memories
The Argument Against Belonging
The archbishopric orders Gonzalo to attend an audience and reconsider his decision. He prepares a forceful argument challenging involuntary membership, the baptismal register, and religious authority.
Key Events
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Troubling Childhood Memories — Gonzalo recalls troubling incidents from his childhood. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Gonzalo's memories
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Archbishopric Notice — The archbishopric orders Gonzalo to attend an audience and reconsider. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Gonzalo's home
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Preparing The Argument — Gonzalo prepares a forceful written argument for the audience. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Gonzalo's home
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Objecting To Consent — He objects to being recorded as a Church member without consent. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Audience preparation
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Database And Secular Law — Gonzalo compares the register to an updatable database and invokes secular constitutional rights. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Audience preparation
Conscience Before Institutions
At the audience, Gonzalo rejects the idea that his doubts should be suppressed or postponed for conversion. He insists that his loyalty belongs to his own conscience rather than to religious or political institutions.
Key Events
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Database And Secular Law — Gonzalo compares the register to an updatable database and invokes secular constitutional rights. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Audience preparation
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The Formal Audience — At the audience, Gonzalo's doubts are treated as a normal spiritual crisis. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Archbishopric audience
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Choosing Conscience — Gonzalo rejects waiting for conversion and prioritizes personal conscience. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Archbishopric audience
The Unerasable Record
The tribunal rejects Gonzalo's application and declares the baptismal record an inviolable account of a historical event. The decision cannot be appealed, ending his attempt without the erasure he sought.
Key Events
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Application Rejected — The tribunal rejects Gonzalo's application to leave the Church. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Tribunal
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Record Declared Historical — The baptismal record is declared an inviolable historical account, not a database. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Tribunal
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No Appeal And No Erasure — The decision cannot be appealed, and Gonzalo does not obtain the erasure he sought. Characters: Gonzalo Tamayo
Location: Tribunal