Story Structure — 5 Plot Phases
A Shadow from the Past
The song introduces the young guns, while the remembered jail escape and Nix's loss explain the suspicion surrounding Tully. Peyton believes Tully can choose a different path.
Key Events
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Song Celebrates the Young Guns — A song celebrates riding with the young guns, introducing the outlaw world surrounding Tully.
Location: Unspecified
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The Jail Escape and Nix's Loss — Outlaws escape from jail and kill Deputy Nix's son, an event recalled as part of the story's background. Characters: Deputy Nix
Location: Unspecified
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Nix Watches Tully — Eight years later, Nix remains suspicious of Tully despite Tully not having killed his son. Characters: Deputy Nix, Tully Rice
Location: Unspecified
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Peyton Offers Guidance — Peyton believes Tully can choose a different path and tries to guide him. Characters: Sheriff Jim Peyton, Tully Rice
Location: Unspecified
Black Crater's Expectations
Tully enters the outlaw world at Black Crater and hears Rongo's recollections of the gang's past. Although others expect him to follow his father's example, he begins resisting the gang's violence.
Key Events
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Tully Reaches Black Crater — Tully finds himself among the outlaws and is offered a place in their world. Characters: Tully Rice
Location: Black Crater
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Rongo Recalls the Past — Rongo recalls his past and the gang's history as Tully encounters the outlaw world. Characters: Rongo Jones / Grandpa, Tully Rice
Location: Black Crater
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Tully Faces Family Expectations — People expect Tully to follow in his father's footsteps, but he begins resisting the gang's violence. Characters: Tully Rice
Location: Black Crater
A Chance Beyond the Gang
Peyton questions Tully about a beaten prisoner and suspects he may have tried to prevent a killing. Josh's offer of honest ranch work presents another possible future.
Key Events
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The Beaten Prisoner — Peyton asks Tully about a badly beaten prisoner and suspects he may have intervened to prevent a killing. Characters: Sheriff Jim Peyton, Tully Rice
Location: Unspecified
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Josh Offers Ranch Work — Josh offers Tully honest work, giving him a possible life outside Black Crater. Characters: Josh, Tully Rice
Location: Josh's ranch
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Kid Cutler Returns — Kid returns after years away as Knox leads the gang following reports that its former leaders are dead. Characters: Kid Cutler, Knox Cutler
Location: Black Crater
The Gang's Divided Future
Kid Cutler returns and challenges Knox's leadership, pressing the gang to take money. The dispute highlights the contrast between the gang's outlaw demands and Tully's resistance.
Key Events
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Kid Cutler Returns — Kid returns after years away as Knox leads the gang following reports that its former leaders are dead. Characters: Kid Cutler, Knox Cutler
Location: Black Crater
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Kid Challenges Knox's Leadership — Kid dismisses the gang's current leadership and demands money. Characters: Kid Cutler, Knox Cutler
Location: Black Crater
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The Dispute Over the Money — Kid urges the gang to take money, while a gang member objects that robbing a blind man would be dishonorable. Characters: Kid Cutler, Tully Rice, Knox Cutler
Location: Black Crater
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Tully's Path Stands Apart — Tully's resistance and Peyton's faith stand against Kid's demand to return to outlaw ways. Characters: Tully Rice, Sheriff Jim Peyton, Kid Cutler
Location: Unspecified
Leaving Grief Behind
Nora reflects on her father's death and the fear that had shaped her life. Tully comforts her, and they plan to leave the next morning.
Key Events
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Nora Mourns Matt — Nora says she hated what her father was but can now stop fearing what might happen next. Characters: Nora Bawdre, Tully Rice
Location: Unspecified
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They Plan to Leave — Tully comforts Nora, and they plan to leave the following morning. Characters: Nora Bawdre, Tully Rice
Location: Unspecified